Score: 7

"Not much content, but drawn well."

submission: Speed Animte: Akane

date: October 23, 2009

You got my hopes up, looking for the wrong Akane though. =(

Score: 3

"Eh."

submission: Mahoro Hentai

date: October 14, 2009

5 points for the girl. -2 points for the guy. Even bisexuals like them one at a time.

Score: 1

"I can't say it's a fantastic start,"

submission: Friends 4eva

date: October 13, 2009

But I'm extremely flattered that you used one of my songs. I honestly wasn't expecting that this early... given that I only added it three days ago, however, says that you haven't been working on this for long.

Flattered though I may be, I'm afraid it would be hypocritical of me if I were to give you extra points just for that. Aside from the obvious problem with the text speed, it just felt kind of... thrown together. Like you made it because you had to rather than because you wanted to... or you just didn't put enough time into it to make it stand out. I'm no artist myself, but it would be insulting if I were to believe that you couldn't do more than line-tool backgrounds and box figures.

Long story short, it depends on what your goal is. If it's purely self-improvement then I can understand submitting it to the portal... to be honest that's kind of what I did with the audio track you used. Once you can afford to, though, I hope you give your work enough time to bring it to life.

A classroom can teach you how to create, but not how to be creative. ;)

Score: 10

"... oh wow."

submission: Guitar Vs. Piano

date: October 25, 2009

It's unbelievably rare that something earns a high score from me, much less a 10, but this is beyond imagination. How you managed to pull this off with so few instrument tracks is awe-inspiring, and the title you used is a large part of what gives the song its meaning. If you'd used a more traditional, phrased title I don't think half as many people (myself included) would have been able to appreciate it as they do now.

Excellent work in all aspects, I honestly don't know what I could recommend to improve this.

Score: 9

"No menagerie of 10's on this one?"

submission: Psybot - Fallen hero

date: October 7, 2009

I'm actually surprised, because I really enjoyed it. True, there are songs of yours that I've enjoyed more, and trance isn't my favorite genre (which isn't to say I don't enjoy it), but it's very melodic, and that much I love.

Glad to see the 'bot is still going strong, though. I haven't gone through your songs since you submitted Heaven is Open - good job.

Score: 9

"Fantastic song,"

submission: Psybot - Second Level

date: October 7, 2009

But how in the world did Fullmetal Alchemist inspire it? I must be having trouble hearing the connection.